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almost feel some... lapfox vibes? awesome piece!

The drums go on without any variation for too long, the main lead melody feels unfocused, the section at 0:37 is too sparse, and loses my attention. the pads that come in at 1:07 need a cadence at the 4th repetition. The pad that comes in at 2:37 opens up and is jarring because its pitch changes too slowly, and feels too dissonant to me.

That being said, your aesthetic choice in synths, drums and the like are really appealing and do capture a feeling of the 80s. Your mixing is good and have some knowledge of mastering, too. Keep at it, Alice! You got a lot going for you.

the repeated motif gets old at about 1 minute in, and the payoff at 1:12 doesn't quite contrast as well I'd hope. I'd look at adding a second melodic section at around 1 minute.

that being said the drums are aesthetically amazing and the mixing is great!

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